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9f6b8a7f25465d18236519090e2d833c45b1d7e9 — cdr-shdr-wdr 11 months ago 45b2a38
doc: Fix some grammar.

* doc/contributing.texi (Alternative Setups): Fix grammar, add double space.
(Sending a Patch Series): Add missing word.
* doc/guix.texi (Daemon Offload Setup, Invoking guix repl): Fix grammar.
(Bootloader Configuration): Fix grammar, capitalize "RAM".

Change-Id: I459c8343b28b2b3474c7a54372f75c61c8111a10
Signed-off-by: Danny Milosavljevic <dannym@friendly-machines.com>
2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

M doc/contributing.texi
M doc/guix.texi
M doc/contributing.texi => doc/contributing.texi +5 -5
@@ 708,10 708,10 @@ similar development experience and they might work better with the
tools you currently use or help you make the transition to Emacs.

The options listed below only provide the alternatives to the Emacs
based setup, which is the most widely used in the Guix community. If
you want to really understand how is the perfect setup for Guix
development supposed to work, we encourage you to read the section
before this regardless the editor you choose to use.
based setup, which is the most widely used in the Guix community.  If
you want to really understand how the perfect setup for Guix development
is supposed to work, we encourage you to read the section before this
regardless of the editor you choose to use.

@menu
* Guile Studio::                First step in your transition to Emacs.


@@ 2296,7 2296,7 @@ $ git send-email -@var{NUMBER_COMMITS} -v@var{REVISION} \

If need be, you may use @option{--cover-letter --annotate} to send
another cover letter, e.g. for explaining what's changed since the last
revision, and these changes are necessary.
revision, and why these changes are necessary.

@node Tracking Bugs and Changes
@section Tracking Bugs and Changes

M doc/guix.texi => doc/guix.texi +8 -8
@@ 1209,7 1209,7 @@ value, configurable via the @code{overload-threshold} field of its
@code{build-machine} object.

@item
Disk space availability.  More than a 100 MiB must be available.
Disk space availability.  More than 100 MiB must be available.
@end enumerate

The @file{/etc/guix/machines.scm} file typically looks like this:


@@ 12880,7 12880,7 @@ guix repl @var{options} [@var{file} @var{args}]
@end example

When a @var{file} argument is provided, @var{file} is
executed as a Guile scripts:
executed as a Guile script:

@example
guix repl my-script.scm


@@ 46173,13 46173,13 @@ File name of an additional initrd to load during the boot.  It may or
may not point to a file in the store, but the main use case is for
out-of-store files containing secrets.

In order to be able to provide decryption keys for the LUKS device, they
need to be available in the initial ram disk.  However they cannot be
In order to be able to provide decryption keys for LUKS devices, they
need to be available in the initial RAM disk.  However they cannot be
stored inside the usual initrd, since it is stored in the store and
being a world-readable (as files in the store are) is not a desired
property for a initrd containing decryption keys.  You can therefore use
this field to instruct GRUB to also load a manually created initrd not
stored in the store.
being world-readable (as files in the store are) is not a desired
property for an initrd containing decryption keys.  You can therefore
use this field to instruct GRUB to also load a manually created initrd
not stored in the store.

For any use case not involving secrets, you should use regular initrd
(@pxref{operating-system Reference, @code{initrd}}) instead.